Desk Crit: Lenrose Fears

Project Name: Dan's Gym website
Creator: Lenrose Fears

The project is looking great so far. In fact, you are much farther along than almost any project I've seen thus far. I really think you should work to contain all of the information in a stable container. On every page, there should be the same navigation bar and graphics. This allows for much easier navigation and it certainly looks more
professional. It should be easy to accomplish...you just use the "save as" function on the index page and rename the page as something else and then add the content to the template set forth on the index page. It's hard to explain here, but I think I showed you how to do it.

Also, I like the graphics in the health tips section. Are you getting external content for each one of these health tips? Since you are so close to being done, you might want to create some more interactivity in some of these, perhaps a Hot Potatoes quiz or something like that.

I might shrink the graphic on the left side to give the content more room. The guy on the left flexing his muscles has a little bit of digital artifacting going on, suggesting that he was maybe smaller and has been upscaled. Shrinking should take care of that.