Project Name: Crisis Management Communications Plan
Creator: Sunny Lim
Looking over your project, I have noticed that the design has changed quite a bit since the last time I looked at it (only a week ago!). It's good to see that you are using the ACA-approved colors and stuff (I know them well). The e-handbook uses a nice bit of ActionScipting, that great book-turning effect. I've seen that one around recently...is it free somewhere? Anyway, that looks really great, but I wonder if maybe the red of the book is a little too dark as a background, but certainly everything seems legible. Also, a concern might be its ability to be updated. I know, from working with the ACA in the past, that they are usually concerned about being able to update material and unless they have access to the raw flash files they can't do that. My suggestion (and you probably don't have time for this) is to make an alternate, "bare bones" no Flash site to complement this one that can be linked from the beginning.
I'm looking at the representive case section and it looks good, though there is a blank box in the upper left that I don't understand. Perhaps a video is going to go there, but it pushes everything down so I have to scroll up and down a bit. It would be great if it all fit on one screen, but, like I said, I don't know what your plans are for the project. At the bottom it says, "Additional information: find out more case" and I think it might need to say "more cases", right? Also, the steps in assembling a crisis team don't seem to be working, but maybe that's because you haven't finished them yet! There should be a space after the comma after the word "sober," by the way; I know that's nitpicking.
I assume you are still working on the simulation because I couldn't get it to work. Also, the resources link was not working, but that might be coming as well.
I hope this helps you, and if you update it over the weekend, let me know!
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Project Name: Online Survey
Creator: Suhwa Lee
Wow. The project looks really fantastic. I think your design sensibilities are good. Everything is very clean and easy to read. On the first page, it should probably say "More DetailS about Online SurveyING or SurveyS" (I capitalized the missing letters there for you). That's just a grammar thing.
The use of voice is great. I think that maybe you could put a note under the audio controller that maybe even says something as simple as "audio," just to let the user know that that's what it controls. Right now, the play button seems to suggest to me that it controls the graphic right above it.
Moving ahead, I think that the quizzes are amazing. More nitpicking: I noticed that the "mail" option in the first survey looks like the graphic has been shrunken but not scaled. It's a little squished-looking. The same goes with the "online" option next to it. It seems strange next to the other two. Also, in Lesson 3, one of the subheadings should say "GuidelineS for designing effective questionnaires." The "q" in questionnaires probably shouldn't be capitalized either. In that section there is a lot of text and it seems different than the rest of the project, which is not so text heavy. Is there any way to break it up, or add audio to it. I'm probably adding to your workload!
Other than that, I find it hard to find fault with the project. Great work!
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